Thorne

[Thorne]

Thorne
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i am a question to the world
NOT AN ANSWER TO BE HEARD

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Character Name:Thorne
Gender:Male
Age:15
Alliance: Chaotic Good
Type: Meister
Partner: if applicable

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and you see the things they never see
ALL YOU WANTED I COULD BE

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Appearance:Thorne is often seen wearing all black, usually with a t-shirt featuring one of his favorite bands. He has long dark hair, which usually hangs a bit over his eyes.When he goes into battle, he wears a long leather coat, open in the front, a white tank top, and black pants that flair out at the bottom.Often times, he cares more about his hair than anything. It HAS to be just the way HE wants it. He spends a lot of time combing his hair, and even has a switchblade comb that he carries with him.He also ALWAYS has a guitar on his back.

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they can't tell me who to be
'CAUSE I'M NOT WHAT THEY SEE

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Personality:

Thorne comes off as being self centered and a little arrogant. He tends to look down on people who he feel are less than him. He sometimes goes back to his old ways, and might occasionally bully or pick on some one, but he usually regrets it later. He's also very quick to anger, but quick to forgive as well.
For him, the most important thing is his his music. Anyone who makes fun of the music he plays will have to face his wrath. He takes it VERY seriously. He often forgets he's supposed to be learning how to use a Weapon, and has had trouble finding a partner because of his lack of focus. He does know how to use his own wavelength to create a defensive barrier.
Ultimately, he just wants to be accepted. Having had such a hard past, he also tends to lash out those around him.He is so used to being abandoned that he almost expects it.This makes it hard for him to make any friends, and makes it hard for a weapon to partner with him.

Likes: Heavy Metal, Lemonade, his long hair, Music (OF COURSE)
Dislikes: Obvious weakness, Pop music, People who mess up his hair.
Fears:Being a bully again, being alone, not being the best guitar player EVER
Goals:To become the most famous guitar player in the world, to conquer his anger and not be such a mean person
Strengths: His Soul Shield, where he uses his wavelength to deflect attacks, his strange tendancy to want to play guitar while fighting, which actually confuses some opponents, his inner anger.
Weaknesses: His inner anger, the fact that he can't keep a partner, and the fact that he holds back his attacking.
Quirks/Habits:

[/size]He often starts a fight by trying to play a song for the enemy, and he gets mad when they interupt him. Tends to forget what he's doing because a song idea came to his head,might even stop and start playing it on his guitar, which is ALWAYS on his back.

how can the world want me to change
THEY'RE THE ONES THAT STAY THE SAME

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Family Members:No known real family, several abandoned foster families.
History:

Thorne knows nothing of his biological parents. He only knows that he was abandoned as a child and lived the first 2 years in a Russian orphanage.He was adopted by American parents who thought they could not have a child of their own, but not long after he was 4, they had a child. They started ignoring him, so bad that when he was sick, they would not take him to a doctor.When word finally got out, the police took him away from his adopted parents. He then went from home to home, and later, school to school. Each time, he became even more angry.When he finally did find a family that kept him he still remained distant.He even became a bully, with other bullies as his "friends". He was constantly beating up and picking on smaller boys,even after the other bullies stopped. Sometimes, they would have to stop him themselves.
The only time he ever felt any peace was when he played his guitar, but this new family did not let him play at home.They thought it was the style of music that he liked that was making him more angry. He would often just carry his guitar around everywhere. Then one day, a new boy moved into town, and he became an even bigger bully than Thorne ever was. He started picking on Thorne for playing his guitar, and telling him his music was bad. One day, Thorne finally had enough. He hit the boy so hard that it nearly killed the boy. What Thorne did not quite know at the time was that he had used his soul to do it, hitting the boy with a high wavelength. The boy was in a coma for a week, and never fully recovered, ending up in a wheelchair for the rest of his life. The police even got involved, putting Thorne in a juvenile detention center.
Some one informed his foster parents about Shibusen, and told them he might need to go there. They agreed, and he showed up. Not long after that, he recieved a letter from them asking him never to come back. He became so angry at himself that he could not concentrate on his studies. Even worse, he could not get along with any partners that he was assigned to. To deal with his problems, he became so into his music that he started to ignore everyone. He secretly determined that he would become the best musician he can, and maybe then people would accept him. He also decided that he did not want to hurt anyone anymore, so while others were learning to attack, he developed a way to alter his wavelength in order to make a protective barrier. But he still could not get along with any weapons.Maybe the next one they assigned to him...

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i want a moment to be real
WANNA TOUCH THINGS I DON'T FEEL

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OOC Name:Caru,Carusio
Age: no
Member Title:Something witty here?
Experience:Several years of experience as a D&D player, chat room RP,various other paper RPG's
Post Example:

It had been a rather difficult day for Thorne again. Once again he had been abandoned by his partner. The guy just simply did not appreciate good music. Still, on the bright side, at least he did not have to hear the little bastard bitch about being held wrong. Whatever, he did not feel comfortable with a gun anyways.
Wandering the grounds aimlessly, he found himself near the basketball court. He decided that this would be a good place to sit and play a song or two. What harm would it do? he thought to himself. Perhaps they would like to hear his music.So he sat and started strumming away. He went to that place in his mind again, losing his worries as he drifted away.
But that would not last long. Being near a basketball court, where a ball can randomly bounce in any direction was probably not the best place for him to sit and play guitar. And that random direction just happen to be his head. The blow knocked him over. Instantly he stood up. "Who did that?!" He yelled.
One boy said, "I'm sorry Thorne! It was an accident!"
Thorne just glared. "It's going to be an accident when I rearrainge your face! You could have broken my guitar!" And then instantly, he regretted saying that.
He sighed, and not saying another word to them, he just walked away. Deep down, he wanted to say something else. But it was too late. He'd already ruined any chance to be accepted. Again.

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Application made by Rachel. Lyrics belong to respective owners.

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A note from Carusio : I reeeeeally hope this is much better. I left his last name out on purpose, since he has no real family anyways. I still have to get used to doing my RP in forum format, but I'll get it!
Read more: www.sefuturesv2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=pending&action=display&thread=5#ixzz1dqm5JvQy

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Accepted
This is much better! You are accepted, my friend! May I make a suggestion about posting though? Could you double space between paragraphs, please? Makes it easier to read.